Bread of our own

Bread of our own

A Poem by dkruie

A bread of our own
Our thoughts pedantic
Poetically shown
As sycophantic

When studied in depth
Our mind’s capricious
Knowledgeable breadth
Very judicious

Shackles of Rousseau 
With a rhythmic flair
Expressing our woe
And struggles we share

Through ink discovered
Avant-guard and sleek
The thoughts we've suffered
We ask for critique

© 2014 dkruie


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Added on November 5, 2014
Last Updated on November 5, 2014
Tags: rhyming, poetic, critique, vocabulary

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dkruie
dkruie

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poetry is a new form of expression I have recently found, I have been afraid of words ie; spelling, punctuation, or any intellectual thought for that matter. Growing up labeled as learning disabled ju.. more..

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A Poem by dkruie