Moment of Truth

Moment of Truth

A Poem by Donald
"

Do you truly know if someone really loves you or are they just using you to pass the time. Then it is a leap of faith if you are sure that you do love her.

"

How do you admit that you are in love.

Do you write of your undying love to her.

Do you sing her praises.

Or you simply tell her that you love her.

It depends on the artist in you.

Simple men use the straight forward approach,

just stating that they are in love.

While those with imagination proclaim it  with style and grace.

On a rooftop,

on a billboard,

or in a stadium.,

in front of the whole world to see.

Declaring your love does not have to be grandiose on a massive scale,

But as a simple statement of fact.

You love her.

As simple as that.

If she responds the same back to you,

then you know her intentions.

However, if she does not.

You never know where you stand.

She may outright reject you from her life.

Or keep you hanging on a chain like an animal to be played with at her pleasure.

You must be sure even before asking,

Or you will never know the truth about her.

Be clear on your intentions,

stating your true feelings is the only answer she needs for love to grow.

© 2013 Donald


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Wow, I learned so much from this, Donald. This is such a lovely piece that should be read by men, especially those who do not yet know how to confess their feelings to their love interest. ;)

"While those with imagination proclaim it with style and grace." This struck me the most. Aren't we, poets, exactly like this? :)

I find the content interesting and informative but I think it should be in the essay form/structure? But, of course, this point is nothing of urgent significance... Keep writing, Donald! (How come I haven't come across your poems before?)

P.S. Thank you so much for your heartwarming reviews! I was honored when you mentioned that I'm the kind of person you'd like to meet one day. I hope we are given the chance.. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Donald

11 Years Ago

You are a very special person, you humble me with your words. You never know what fate has in store .. read more



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Wow, I learned so much from this, Donald. This is such a lovely piece that should be read by men, especially those who do not yet know how to confess their feelings to their love interest. ;)

"While those with imagination proclaim it with style and grace." This struck me the most. Aren't we, poets, exactly like this? :)

I find the content interesting and informative but I think it should be in the essay form/structure? But, of course, this point is nothing of urgent significance... Keep writing, Donald! (How come I haven't come across your poems before?)

P.S. Thank you so much for your heartwarming reviews! I was honored when you mentioned that I'm the kind of person you'd like to meet one day. I hope we are given the chance.. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Donald

11 Years Ago

You are a very special person, you humble me with your words. You never know what fate has in store .. read more
For your pleasure. Enjoy it all.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Donald
Donald

Battle Creek, MI



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I enjoy writing poetry. It allows me to express myself and clear my head. It gives me focus. I enjoy science fiction, photography and I am single at the moment. I am also a cat lover. I have written s.. more..

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