Longing of desire

This describes the pain of love, the longing and the feelings involve. Caution the feelings run deep in this one.

To be apart is like being on fire,

all of you aches in the pain of their absence from your desire,

makes you cry from the pain of your soul.

It forces to wonder if your heart will ever feel whole.

You may plunge into the pit of darkness and despair.

Yet the spark of love is still there.

It is faint and is hard to see,

but still it is there to be.

To be alive,

and feel alive are two different things.

One should never doubt about one’s own mortality,

reason for life,

to but to be apart from one you love,

still fills with a longing to embrace and desire.

As with all affairs of the heart,

one should be aware.

The pain is real and feelings feel insane.

But at the core of your love is a sense of peace and serenity,

knowing that your true loves feels the same as you.

The same doubts and pain,

must run through her soul,

helps you endure something this insane.

Also never doubt the power of love because it lifts you up,

raises you to new heights of pleasure when you embrace this one true love once again.

In his divine wisdom,

he has given us one great gift,

a way to unite in pleasure and delight,

of another soul’s embrace.

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

Donald thank you for this poem. I am away from my wife and kids, stationed overseas for a bit. This poem spoke to me deeply. I thank you for giving your gift to enlighten others. That is the true nature of a writer, to inspire and encourage. Thank you. Great poem.

[wordwarrior]

Such deep and heartfelt writing. This is so thought provoking because it makes us all stop and take stock of our lives, where we've been, are and going.
Great writing!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

DONALD - GOOD TO READ YOU AGAIN...THE LINES HERE GIVE MUCH TO THE WORDS IN THIS VERSE...I WOULD JUST TIGHTEN THE LONGER ONES AND GIVE THE READER MORE TIME TO SOAK IN THE THOUGHTS...JUST MY OPINION AGAIN...