Finding Eternity

This is about how i found my way to God through Freeing myself into his hands and learning it has nothing to do with my own stregnth

Uncover  the  life  in  which  I  live.

Tried  to  unlock  the  door,  but  only  broke  the  key.

Now  I’m  stuck  with  metal  jabbed  inside  of  me.

Knocking  on  heavens  door,  but  still  know  answer.

I  cry,  but  I  guess  not  enough  to  unleash  the  pain.

These  hands  will  not  release  me,  and  no  magic  word  will  please  me.

So  I  fall  to  the  ground  with  faces  all  around.

I  beg  for  freedom

Seems  too  late

I  repent  for  the  sins  and  for  the  wasted  time  iv  spent.

I  will  need  no  key,  just  a  heart  full  and  free,  to  enter  into  eternity.

 

Reviews

[thehottamale]

well done, I loved it!

[0AudreyClaire0]

This is beautiful and the imagery is fantastic. Very well done. :)
-Aud

[Crifa]

Very unique, I like how you rhyme inside of the line rather than different lines together. Good job keep it up