poem 2-3

Subjugate once pacified

sanctuary of the public eye

subtlety of the promenade

suffering behind the palisade

separatism once poncified

solemn-esque yet putrefied

secretly they plagiarize

simpletons once punditried

souring further the polarized

severing themselves of the pluralized

scheming of the patronized

scathing replies from the plutocrazied

suppleness shown by poetic tome

scribed sequels still yet unequal

due to political polypary

 

Reviews

[TLK]

It's hard to know what to say about this. It seems to be a word soup. The first sentence makes sense, and perhaps the second could link to it if followed up by something that explains how such rough treatment of the pacified could be explained to the public. We do live in a world where the mistreatment of innocents can be allowed through a heightening of fear and hatred against their group.

However, the next three lines are baffling. In particular, "separatism once poncified". I might go for 'personified' instead, for the reason that it is actually definitely a word.

I have to admit I'm left with the feeling that you're making up -ied words for the fun of it.

Sorry that this is the first review in four years. But at least you've got one!

Here is a list of words that end in -ied, in case it could be helpful:

accompanied acidified alibied allied amplified applied atrophied autopsied babied bandied beautified belied bellied birdied bloodied blowdried bodied bullied buried busied calcified candied carried certified citified clarified classified codified complied copied cried crucified curried declassified defied dehumidified deified denied detoxified died dignified dirtied disembodied disqualified dissatisfied diversified dried eddied edified electrified embodied emptied envied exemplified falsified fancied ferried flurried fortified frenzied fried galleried gentrified glorified gratified harried horrified humidified hurried identified implied indemnified intensified inventoried justified levied lied lignified liquefied lithified liveried lobbied magnified married misapplied misidentified modified mollified mortified muddied multiplied mummified mutinied mystified nannied nonlithified nonqualified notified nullified objectified occupied ossified overqualified oversimplified oversupplied pacified parodied parried partied personified petrified photocopied pied pitied plied preoccupied propertied prophesied purified qualified quandaried quantified rallied rarefied ratified readied recertified reclassified rectified relied remarried remedied replied retried reunified reverified salaried sanctified satisfied scurried shied signified simplified skied solidified specified spied steadied storied stratified studied stupefied stymied sullied supplied tallied taxied terrified testified tidied tied tried typified unaccompanied unclassified undignified undiversified unhurried unidentified unified unjustified unmarried unmodified unoccupied unqualified unratified unsatisfied unspecified unstratified unsullied untied untried unverified unworried varied verified vied vilified wearied worried accompanied acidified alibied allied amplified applied atrophied autopsied babied bandied beautified belied bellied birdied bloodied blowdried bodied bullied buried busied calcified candied carried certified citified clarified classified codified complied copied cried crucified curried declassified defied dehumidified deified denied detoxified died dignified dirtied disembodied disqualified dissatisfied diversified dried eddied edified electrified embodied emptied envied exemplified falsified fancied ferried flurried fortified frenzied fried galleried gentrified glorified gratified harried horrified humidified hurried identified implied indemnified intensified inventoried justified levied lied lignified liquefied lithified liveried lobbied magnified married misapplied misidentified modified mollified mortified muddied multiplied mummified mutinied mystified nannied nonlithified nonqualified notified nullified objectified occupied ossified overqualified oversimplified oversupplied pacified parodied parried partied personified petrified photocopied pied pitied plied preoccupied propertied prophesied purified qualified quandaried quantified rallied rarefied ratified readied recertified reclassified rectified relied remarried remedied replied retried reunified reverified salaried sanctified satisfied scurried shied signified simplified skied solidified specified spied steadied storied stratified studied stupefied stymied sullied supplied tallied taxied terrified testified tidied tied tried typified unaccompanied unclassified undignified undiversified unhurried unidentified unified unjustified unmarried unmodified unoccupied unqualified unratified unsatisfied unspecified unstratified unsullied untied untried unverified unworried varied verified vied vilified wearied worried accompanied acidified alibied allied amplified applied atrophied autopsied babied bandied beautified belied bellied birdied bloodied blowdried bodied bullied buried busied calcified candied carried certified citified clarified classified codified complied copied cried crucified curried declassified defied dehumidified deified denied detoxified died dignified dirtied disembodied disqualified dissatisfied diversified dried eddied edified electrified embodied emptied envied exemplified falsified fancied ferried flurried fortified frenzied fried galleried gentrified glorified gratified harried horrified humidified hurried identified implied indemnified intensified inventoried justified levied lied lignified liquefied lithified liveried lobbied magnified married misapplied misidentified modified mollified mortified muddied multiplied mummified mutinied mystified nannied nonlithified nonqualified notified nullified objectified occupied ossified overqualified oversimplified oversupplied pacified parodied parried partied personified petrified photocopied pied pitied plied preoccupied propertied prophesied purified qualified quandaried quantified rallied rarefied ratified readied recertified reclassified rectified relied remarried remedied replied retried reunified reverified salaried sanctified satisfied scurried shied signified simplified skied solidified specified spied steadied storied stratified studied stupefied stymied sullied supplied tallied taxied terrified testified tidied tied tried typified unaccompanied unclassified undignified undiversified unhurried unidentified unified unjustified unmarried unmodified unoccupied unqualified unratified unsatisfied unspecified unstratified unsullied untied untried unverified unworried varied verified vied vilified wearied worried