Soup

A tiny scrap of nursery rhyme that popped into my head in the night.

Soup

 

Lay the fire,

Fill the pot,

Stir it up,

Serve it hot.

Author's Note

Initial reactions and constructive criticism welcome. This is meant to resemble a traditional nursery rhyme, despite the sparse verbage.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Ya can't beat soup! Like your well-chosen few words, soup can be sparse and delicious.

[Debbie Barry]

Thanks, Samuel! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it! When it comes to soup, simple is often best.