Over the Sea

Over the Sea

A Poem by Debbie Barry
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A children's ballad that drifted into my head this morning, written in the style of a 17th Century Scottish ballad. Note: It has 20 verses, plus choruses, so it's long.

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Over the Sea

 

The ships, the ships have sail’d away,

Over the sea, over the sea;

The ships, the      ships have sail’d away,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

My son he is a bonny lad,

Over the sea, over the sea;

With apple cheeks, and straw bright hair.

Over the deep blue sea.

 

He grew to be a fine, strong lad,

Over the sea, over the sea;

And dream’d of seeing distant lands,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

He went the Grangemouth Falkirk’s port,

Over the sea, o    ver the sea;

He sign’d aboard a merchant ship,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

His da and I, we sent him off,

Over the sea, over the sea;

And bid him come safe home anon,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

I stood and watch’d upon the crag,

Over the sea, over the sea;

The wheeling sea birds with me cry’d,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

My son he had a bonny lass,

Over the sea, over the sea;

He promis’d he would wed one day,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

Thro’ summer sun and winter cold,

Over the sea, over the sea;

His lass she waited his return,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

Word was brought of a bitter storm,

Over the sea, over the sea;

And shipwreck off the Irish shore,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

His lass then wept, and so I pray’d,

Over the sea, over the sea;

God to protect, and keep him safe,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

His da        walk’d to the quay to find,

Over the sea, over the sea;

If t’was his ship upon the rocks,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

He sought for word of my son’s fate,

Over the sea, over the sea;

When he knew all, he walk’d back home.

Over the deep blue sea.

 

The lass and I, we saw da come,

Over the sea, over the sea;

“What news?” we ask’d when he came in,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

My man sat down beside the hearth,

Over the sea, over the sea;

“T’was not our son’s ship broke apart,”

Over the deep blue sea.

 

His lass and I, we cheer’d and cry’d,

Over the sea, over the sea;

To learn my son still sail’d the waves,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

A year we waited, then two more,

Over the sea, over the sea;

Then one day sail’d he home once more,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

At supper’s end, there came a shout,

Over the sea, over the sea;

Across the moor, then came my son,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

My son a hearty seaman’d grown,

Over the sea, over the sea;

He hug’d his da, and then hug’d me,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

The lass he kiss’d, and held her tight,

Over the sea, over the sea;

Then caus’d be read the wedding banns,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

He took his lass to be his bride,

Over the sea, over the sea;

And soon they got their weddéd bliss,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

A bairn was born at lamb ing time,

Over the sea, over the sea;

With apple cheeks, and straw bright hair,

Over the deep blue sea.

 

My son, he sow’d a field of oats,

Over the sea, over the sea;

And vow’d he’d never sail again,

O ver the deep blue sea.

 

The ships, the ships have sail’d away,

Over the sea, over the sea;

The ships, the      ships have sail’d away,

Over the deep blue sea.

© 2018 Debbie Barry


Author's Note

Debbie Barry
Initial reactions and constructive criticism welcome. Yes, it's long. This is meant to resemble a traditional Scottish ballad.

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Of Course you know I love the way you write. However, I felt the story was a little lost against the chorus! While I do understand the objective I found myself skipping "over the sea" to get to the next snippet involving our "apple cheeked man. I'm a fan! just felt the story got a little lost!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

6 Years Ago

Thank you, John! I appreciate your honest review more than I would glowing praise, in this case. H.. read more
John Ciarmello

6 Years Ago

you're welcome Debbie



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This being written in the style of a 17th Century Scottish ballad endears it ten fold, at least for this reader. Nice to meet you, Debbie!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Kelly! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it. It's nice to meet you, as well. It's alway.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

6 Years Ago

You did an amazing job!
Debbie Barry

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Of Course you know I love the way you write. However, I felt the story was a little lost against the chorus! While I do understand the objective I found myself skipping "over the sea" to get to the next snippet involving our "apple cheeked man. I'm a fan! just felt the story got a little lost!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

6 Years Ago

Thank you, John! I appreciate your honest review more than I would glowing praise, in this case. H.. read more
John Ciarmello

6 Years Ago

you're welcome Debbie

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Added on March 7, 2018
Last Updated on March 8, 2018
Tags: poem, nursery rhyme, ballad, sailing ships, merchant ships, 17th century, grangemouth felkirk, seaport quay, romance

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Debbie Barry
Debbie Barry

Clarkston, MI



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I live with my husband in southeastern Michigan with our two cats, Mister and Goblin. We enjoy exploring history through French and Indian War re-enactment and through medieval re-enactment in the So.. more..

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