Ladybug Lunch

Just a scrap of nonsense. Intended to be anew nursery rhyme.

A little,  spotted ladybug

Crawled along a log;

With the sudden curling of a tongue,

She was luncheon for a frog.

Author's Note

Just a scrap of nonsense that popped into my head when I couldn't sleep. It's supposed to feel like a traditional nursery rhyme. Initial reactions and constructive criticism welcome.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Brilliant, funny... concise.. visual. Great four-liner. Thank you for making me curl up with delight.

Happy New Year, from Emma Ant..