Fishing

A scrap of verse that I wrote in the middle of the night. A new nursery rhyme.

Fishy,  fishy,

Swimming in the sea,

Pray swallow my hook,

And be dinner for me!

Author's Note

Please ignore typos. I wrote this in haste in the middle of the night. Initial reactions appreciated.

Reviews

[Neville]

And if she did
And if she do
In the morning
She would feel
gutted too..........Neville

[Debbie Barry]

Oh, goodness, Neville! That's fun! Thanks!

[Neville]

I meant to mention that I liked 'Fishing' a lot, but yeah, that's me all over. N

[Debbie Barry]

No, it was great! I'm really glad you liked the poem. It's a silly thing, but it's another that came to me fully formed, so I had to keep it.