Everything about you is perfect

Everything about you is perfect

A Poem by Dug
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In case you didn't already know

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I already know the answer
But I'm still gonna ask anyway
There never really was a question
I just hate leaving things unsaid

I won't worry about what they say
Already know that you're out of my league
But I don't see why that should matter
Since I didn't come here to compete


I'm not gonna wait for the right time
Cause the right time's never gonna be now

Everything about you is perfect
Everything about you is wonderful
Right now I must look pretty stupid
But I'd be dumb to just say nothing at all


I'm not gonna try to impress you
That kind of thing demeans us both
You'd find out the truth anyway
That my whole life is a joke


And I'm not gonna make a smooth entrance
I'll just tell you right to your face

Everything about you is pefect
Everything about you iss wonderful
Right now I must look pretty stupid
But I'd be dumb to just say nothing at all



But on the off chance someone like you
Would be with someone like me
I'd treat you so well that you'd never leave

Cause everything about you is perfect
Everything about you's wonderful
Right now I must look pretty stupid
But I'd be dumb to just say nothing at all

Everything about you is special
Everything about you is rare
I know you might not expect to hear it
Cause I don't think you noticed I'm there
 

© 2008 Dug


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Ah yes...the one that we can't have...but want the most...I have one myself..damn..I get to see her in a month..exciting...but yes..the words spoken are that of which need to be projected..I've done it myself and whatever happens ....you usually get a real good friendship out of it..it brings a closeness to the friendship that is uncomparable. The one I want is my best friend and now she is married and we still are closer than her and her spouse...its is crazy...we keep quet until we are alone then our love comes out it is nice but quite frustrating haow it works.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Stunning. Beautiful.
This deep attraction to the extraordinary is wonderfully portrayed.
The simple truth of the matter, that I'm gonna be me and keep things simple....beautiful.
So often a real-world experience where telling the truth as it is is the best option.
To say it is probably risky, but its worth it when you really feel it- things can then move either forward or on...
The first verse reminds me of myself and some of my friends...almost rambling, but with thought and personal insight that is incomplete in words, and therefore possibly more difficult to grasp, but in being so, more worthwhile.
Everything about this poem is perfect.



Posted 15 Years Ago


aww, I know that feeling all too well. That's how I felt before I tried to make a move on my ex. bf, a long time ago. The aftermath, would be cool to see, I know mine, :) :S ----mishy

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True feelings are hard to deny when heard so honestly. Im with the other girls here when I say my heart melted. The thing is you never know who the girl is inside. I've seen some real b*****s retort something assanine. But all that over hear it are yours.
Wonderful to read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely beautiful, I was singing it! My heart aches for you, that unseen love. I also ache to hear these words, the person you wrote this for os very lucky, even if they don't know it. I fell in love with the lyrical quality and the words themselves. I'd melt if someone said this to me...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh I love this..... great lyrics.... makes me want to hug you....lol... REALLY GREAT STUFF HERE !!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


It's very scary to take a risk and share your heart knowing you could be rejected. Nicely done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a tender, beautiful piece. I would be eternally flattered and honored if someone wrote such a poem about me. She is a lucky girl.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah yes...the one that we can't have...but want the most...I have one myself..damn..I get to see her in a month..exciting...but yes..the words spoken are that of which need to be projected..I've done it myself and whatever happens ....you usually get a real good friendship out of it..it brings a closeness to the friendship that is uncomparable. The one I want is my best friend and now she is married and we still are closer than her and her spouse...its is crazy...we keep quet until we are alone then our love comes out it is nice but quite frustrating haow it works.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWW THIS IS SO SWEET.. IF YOUR EVER IN THAT SITUATION JUST SAY THOSE WORD .. I WOULD LOVE YOU IF YOU SAID THAT TO ME LOL

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think you should really send this to someone.
id crap myself if someone said this to me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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