Lonely but not alone

This is an "I Am" poetry type. It is for school and were making a book of poetry in class. -Yellow

I Am lonely but not alone;

I wonder what they say

I hear them wispering in my ear

I see them walk by everyday

I want to help him, but I cant my dear.

I Am lonely but not alone;

 

As I pretend I am not scared

I feel that hand on my shoulder, he would not dare.

I touch his hand, and think of when this kid used to be mine

I worry that he will change over time.

I cry when he shines that secretly corrupt grin, because i know that this is his game

how do you think he's gotten all this fame

I Am lonely but not alone;

 

I understand this; for this boy is just a joke

And I say I hope you choke.

He jumped back looking at me with this look that bared only disgust

I dream of a day when they can see

how difficult it would be to actually be me

I try to walk in their shoes for a while at least

but I look in the mirrior and I only see a porclin, fine haired, little beast.

I hope when I leave he's haunted by me,

the me that only I can see.

I Am lonely but not alone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Im sorry, it doesn't all rhyme. I nkow most of my poems do, but this one was for school....
Do you think that this poem is ok to read infront of like 2000 sophmores and juniors?

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a captivating play on words~ great symbolism and descriptives~

[deeps]

I found this quite an amazing write. I really enjoyed this.

[hmm]

It doesn't have to rhyme to be a poem, your thoughts are what counts. This is sad really.

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

I really like this.

[E. A. Fielder]

This poem seems like its about an abusive relationship. What does it mean to you> What did you write it for? Not every poem needs to rhyme. Any poem you write that has meaning to you is worth reading to even a million people. Keep writing!

[Krista]

I think if you feel comfortable reading it aloud then do so. Its a really great poem and I bet alot of people can really relate to it. I know for one thing I can relate to it alot and I appreciate you writing this.

[JENY]

Good…I liked it….

[Ruth]

I think so hon!
This shows an understanding, a deep one that makes the reader aware that nothing is black and white! You have experience with what you say
xx