The Test

No one is harder on me than myself
Or so it seems
They all say that you should be my one worse enemy
What they say runs through my mind
like clumsy mice that are blind
what they know, and what they see
can be up to you and me.
Your my only security.
When I'm with you there's no shame
We'll try to find someone else to blame
They say we lack the progress
They say that we're a mess
They say we'll never make it
I know we're better than there test.

Reviews

[Gustan Joseph]

I really like the way it flows. I like.

[Ruth]

The structure to this is really good:) Slows the speech down and allows to think! xx

[Elaine]

I liked reading this it was very good. nice job.

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write here
i thought this was wonderful

[*~Kristy~*]

Is the "we" a boyfriend, friend, or yourself? Or am I wrong entirely? I loved the first two lines, though, it made me think of myself. OVerall, this is an amazing poem!