we parish

all things come to an end

A baby being born

Or a child taking his first step

Or to becoming a new parent

We bloom

Like becoming the president we bloom

We bloom

Like a child listening to his mother’s slow calm heart

That is sure to bring ease

We bloom but all good things must come to an end

Everything as we know it will parish

Like shadows of the moonlight that are soon to disappear

We parish

Like a blooming flower in the dawn of June being poisoned by a drought of love

We parish

Like the smallest ray of the sun last light

 We parish

 Even though as hard as we try

No matter what we do

We parish

Every success comes with a failure  

From the glory of war

To the grief of death

We were meant to perish

But to the light of day we rest like we have tomorrow

Yet to find fate is waiting

For the unrest full soul

To turn away

So it can steal it

And Since the body of a man

Lays dead with no soul

He perishes

Author's Note

can you plz tell me what you think truthfully this is the first poem i ever wrote.plz tel me all my mistakes even little grammar mistakes

Reviews

[Bianca]

- I think the only mistake you made was not adding an " 's"(apostrophe s) on "sun last light" which is if i'm not mistaken the fifteenth line of your poem.

I think that it's beautiful I love the sensory imagery that you used because I can picture it. I love it when words are used clearly weaved into perfect sentences that paints images into your head.
Puuurfect! :3

[soulesswriter]

Thanks I'll fix that now that I'm out 4 break.:) and thank you if u ever want me to read anything just ask

[Sami Khalil]

We (perish) is a good poem...Thank you for sharing...:)..............