The knife

The knife

A Poem by soulesswriter
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It killed her and now I'm going to kill it

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The knife
The bloodiest thing I saw
The hatred in the eyes made me run
I felt hopeless and in pain
I closed my eyes and ran to a place where no one can touch me
And let my soul die over and over until I thought my body would do the same
I swore to it
I swore to make it suffer
For it did not take only my heart but gave me many things
Despair, loneness, and sadness
I been drunk in hatred even though I don’t know what drunk is
Now I have the world in my palms and it up my sleeves
With this power any mere human would have gone mad
But I have a purpose
My purpose is to end it
Because it took her
Her
It took the one person I wanted to protect
It took her
My only family
My only need
Now I will join her and destroy it with me
It has ruined my life
Now I ruined it and am able to finish it
The last bit of blood shedded was my own.
I told her to stay away and she got near
Now it killed her and I killed it
I killed myself
and now I close my eyes and feel my soul fly away
I dont have time to count my sins but just enough time to hope I'll be forgiven
I want to go to heaven to see her
But deep inside I know I won't

© 2013 soulesswriter


Author's Note

soulesswriter
I hope guys like it I don't know how to classifiy this but all I can say is I hope u enjoy and if u find a mistake plz tell me

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this is sad. It's a good write but it is actually quit a tragic romance.
It's seems unselfish too, well towards the end and thus one can conclude that it holds real love, for when one is willing to give it all up, have nothing left, is when I think we know we truly love someone.
Nice write, once again.
-rain

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Tragically romantic and sadly tragic...The title is good too...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is sad. It's a good write but it is actually quit a tragic romance.
It's seems unselfish too, well towards the end and thus one can conclude that it holds real love, for when one is willing to give it all up, have nothing left, is when I think we know we truly love someone.
Nice write, once again.
-rain

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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