Mannequin of Sin

This is hard to describe. this was after a nasty break-up. I've included an illustration i did for this.

I am still.

I have want.

I am void.

See what you've wrought:

A muddied mass of flesh and bone -

Bloody with my sins

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think. describe how this makes you feel.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

Short but very intense.
It makes me feel like the person speaking in the poem is barely surviving.
I really like this.
I hope everything works out well for you.
-Elissa