sin

sin

A Poem by dessy
"

could not get this person outa my mind....

"
your name / on my tongue

rolls tastey / incessantly

sweet savory

delicious thoughts evoke / mental salavation

and a coy smile / of anticipation

your rough hands / contrast

my soft skin / somatic slip

into

sensual

sin.

© 2008 dessy


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Outstanding use of words. You said it all in so few words. I like the format and the story in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


That was cool how you wrote this Dessy!
I like the pattern you choose to present
your sin.......smiles

Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 15 Years Ago


wooooO

LOVE IT

Delicious! This is the first piece that I have read by you and I can't wait to read the rest!
Cheers,lea

Posted 16 Years Ago


Kind of lusty, kind of romantic.Either way this was a very good poem. Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

Posted 16 Years Ago


oooohhh, I love this...kinda sneaky, kinda sensual, kinda some kinda beautiful!

your name / on my tongue
rolls tastey / incessantly - Great lines! Love this!

Good job! Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 9, 2008

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dessy
dessy

great falls, MT



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