Southern Stars and Bars on My Heart

Southern Stars and Bars on My Heart

A Poem by Dreamer137

Southern stars in all their grace

still couldn't make me miss this place

i miss my home i miss my friends

but it seems to me that its at an end

while i was gone everything changed

and there's no one really here to blame

i wish it hadn't been like this

i wish i still knew the people that i missed

but they have changed and so have i

it's all become just one big lie

i'm not home sick anymore

i just want to see my own front door

it seems to me that at the start

i didn't have these bars on my heart

 

© 2012 Dreamer137


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Wow sad write yet powerful.
Wonderful flow and rhyme scheme.
Very Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on March 26, 2012
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Dreamer137
Dreamer137

Catlettsburg, KY



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Hi I'm Krynn, I'm 17 and a senior in high school in Kentucky. I hope to pursue culinary arts in college. Writing is something I've always enjoyed, and when verse is in my head i have to right it down... more..

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