The Sense Of Feeling You..

The Sense Of Feeling You..

A Poem by Divya Punjabi
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A feel of his touch... specially the unexpected one! <3

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He was there standing still,

Right in front of me.
Glancing at my ordinary face,
I was avoiding beautifully.

Slowly his quiet footsteps,
Fetched him in my way.
Turning my dreams into reality,
Materializing my reasons to pray.

Heart pounding with extreme feelings,
Eyeballs running to every corner.
Suddenly, he covered my vision,
Coming nearer, getting closer.

Oh! he interrupted my poetry,
Allowing the paper to dance with breeze.
Elfish pen tiptoed to darkness,
My fingers crossed for the moment to freeze.

Soon he gently entangled, his hands with mine,
Stirring me with his warm caring touch.
We wasted our time in holding hands, reading eyes,
He surely sensed my erotic urge....


© 2013 Divya Punjabi


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Divya Punjabi
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I loved it:) So cute!! Innocent but knowing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Divya Punjabi

11 Years Ago

thanxx so much for reading :)
written nicely, and with quite an innocence displayed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Divya Punjabi

11 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
Very well presented... KUDOS!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Divya Punjabi

11 Years Ago

thanks dear :)
Gaurav Walia

11 Years Ago

You're quite welcome :D

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Added on July 28, 2013
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Divya Punjabi
Divya Punjabi

Ajmer, Rajasthan, India



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It took a lot of time.. to decide what to write about me!! i'm a simple girl.. and i love to make friends.. :) i'm working on fashion designing.. but I love to write too.. so.. here I'm :) ( I hope i'.. more..

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