Will you be my valentine...??

Its a romantic poem.. where a girl is expressing her feelings to her prince charming..! i wrote this.. on last valentines day.. :)

Its not the first time,that your lips smiled for me...
But this time, it feels awesome, Damn! I just can't breathe..

Don't know What's happening, Don't even want to know,
I just want to be with you, & let my feelings flow!

Just a touch of your hand, takes me to another world..
Is this something, that people call love??

Your thoughts make me blush, that's what my mirror says..
and my smile has got a feeling, to smile for you these days...

Baby, my words just rhyme for you!
I'm waiting for the moment.. when i'll say " I DO ! "

So let me fall for you, one more time..
Tell me dear, Can I call you my valentine,.,, ??

Will you love me, the way I love?
Will you save me.. For the care I serve??

Will you let me.. call you mine..??
Tell me sweetheart.. Will you be my VALENTINE...! ?? <3

Author's Note

i just want reviews... good or bad.. doesn't matter! :)

Reviews

[Rahul]

Hi, "Divya"!
This's really a nice write, liked your flow "Pretty". I loved these lines
Just a touch of your hand, takes me to another world..
Is this something, that people call love??...

there's so much questioning you've just dropped from your heart indeed. Well, totally this wriet came from your heart that beats for someone i think... lol
great write, i think it's a "PURE PUBJABI TOUCH" of punjabi girl who're in love...isn't it...lol ! 500/500
one more thin, i've favourated your this lovely write and i'm gonna subscribe you write now cuz.. you've a great talent i must say!

[Divya Punjabi]

OH that's such a pleasure to know.. that you liked it so much! :).. Thanxx for such a lovely review.. and i'm not in love anyways.. lol! thank you so much for appreciating my poem.. i'm obliged.. seriously! :)

[Rahul]

My pleasure.... !
Hahaha :) thank god yet you aren't in love... you did afraid me...LOL...

[naumaan manwani]

Its not the first time,that your lips
smiled for me...
But this time, it feels awesome,
Damn! I just can't breathe..

this line i loved it...ur valentine will loves u more..i just got some imagination with poem..awesom.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A telling and crafted piece that is easy to read but lets the reader think, well done, good read.

[Divya Punjabi]

thanks for your lovely review.. :)