OCEAN

An acrostic

Open waves cascading against a sandy smooth floor

Contributing shells at times to the shore

Envelope my senses I do implore

Against all logic I'm drawn to the shore

Never want to leave, I'm grounded to the floor

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a well done acrostic...i like "contributing shells..."

that is really nice phrasing...

i feel the pace of the waves in this.