When I Look in the Mirror

When I look in the mirror

I want to embrace the image I see

That sultry brown woman

Looking back at me

My soft feather lips

Below a straight perfect nose

My big brown doe eyes

And my cheeks blushing rose

The curve of my bust 

presses through my tight dress

My hips round out smoothly

You can't help but caress

The shapely round hide

Curves to strong limber thighs

As I look in the mirror

I can't help but sigh.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I loved this piece quite beautiful and Humbling.


there is something much more beautiful within
don't listen to what the mirror doesn't see beauty lays
in the heart and shines from the inside out.



Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.


Blessings. Benita

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Why is it so hard for us to love ourselves for who we are, if we can't do that how can we expects others to love us… we become our own harshest critic.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A crisp piece of writing which appears to reflects someone who internally questions their beauty but who accepts who they are.

[A. Amos]

Now this was interesting what a way to make other fall in love with you...love every single line, you're extremely talented my friend!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

accepting ourselves is number one priority....yet if we do not, then we see what we want to see.

i like this...and actually i would still consider a book if i were you...poetry is a harder sell and you may have to self-publish....but that still works out pretty well.

[MerylDivya]

I actually found some poetry publishers through writers cafe and submitted queries while submitting the nonfiction query.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i don't think poetry has ever been a big sell...but for those who love it...well, there is an audience...good luck with your queries.

[MerylDivya]

Thanks Jacob!

[Rene Salinas]

Acceptance is always tough it requires to die within oneself. Sounds dramatic but in reality if you have no more wishes and desires as what you want to be or become then youare finally open to embrace what's right before you. I like the way you describe what I assume is how you see yourself. You seem kind.
You can change most things within the context of phisycal, you can try to work on the world of emotions but to hear and see in this case exactly who you are.....

A lifetime of trying.

Thankyou