You, my friend!

For a friend who touched your life!

You.. my friend.. you!!

you make my dimensions..

you make the past - and the present

and the future - oh who's seen the future? 

That's what you said!

decorated with all colors,

we danced in the magic..

oh my friend,

you exist in the nothing

everywhere I go, you mirror me..

every empty canvas, you color it

together we soared the skies,

the mysteries we created, my pal!

the songs we sang, how the hours ran!

every pain was easy 

"every love is worth it"

the words still 

ring a bell!

we did not sail, had no adventure tales,

and yet the nothingness we shared

still remains the deepest I have felt

Reviews

[747]

Funny how even just sharing time with someone, even though you aren't doing anything other than maybe talking or watching TV, can create such strong bonds.
An interesting piece, good write!

[onmyway]

Yes, I value those connections even better.. they are more deep-rooted in a way I feel! Thank you for your words..

[Jupiter]

I love this! It's so enthusiastic and at the same time has a deep meaning. The last stanza was fantastic(:

[onmyway]

Thanks !! :)

[Level-headed]

we did not sail, had no adventure tales,

and yet the nothingness we shared

still remains the deepest I have felt.

Yup this is my favourite part because I've been trying to find someone to express the feeling of being closer to someone despite not doing anything with them really....nice writing here

[onmyway]

yes - that feeling is hard to find.. :)

[Godsent Abode]

I like your flow. It is simply amazing. Keep scribing poet.

[onmyway]

Thank you - I appreciate the encouragement!

[Ovi-Odiete]

Immense...
A very great piece.

[onmyway]

Thanks !! :)