My Hope For You

I am thinking about my daughter who has been having a difficult time

You are my heart and upon it

I have etched my secret hopes for you:

My hope that you burn brightly, and long�"

That your most heartfelt desires lash themselves

Upon the winds of passion

And that your heart’s love flows

Out of eyes and mouth to the tuneful ears

Of those who surround you.

That hope survives and blooms in the inclement weather

Of disappointment�"

That you find and etch your secret desires

For your own child�"

And that when I am gone,

That in a flowering corner of your soul

That you feel my love for you�"

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Really nice piece for your daughter!

[Tate Morgan]

So beautiful this is I cannot tell yo what i saw as I read it But a mother and child came to mind a old lover and new friend.beautiful selfless

Amazing how your heart translate the thoughts, into the ink.... stunning! xx

[Ladysue]

This was incredibly beautiful filled with great emotion and meaning...and the ending was amazing and so heartfelt...

[Aidz]

From mother to daughter .. no stronger bond... beautiful

[EMMIE]

THERE IS SO MUCH EMOTION AND MEANING IN THOSE LINES THERE. THIS IS AN AWESOME HEARTFELT POEM.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

When I am gone,
That in a flowering corner of your soul
That you feel my love for you" beautiful words Audrey!

[J. J. Nightingale]

I have two daughters and five grand daughters .. We hope they feel our love for all their life ....

Beautiful wishes .. Jasmine ..

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful work. Well penned.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

These words express such heart felt live for a daughter from a mom, the end was stunning!