Who Holds This?

A poem about an unsettled heart

The moment loosens itself

and flees the anxiety

of a heart unsettled.

Is it mine or yours?

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
Your write says so much and you accomplished it with just four short lines in one verse. A truly fine example of saying more with less, I am impressed!

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[sarah]

This is amazing so simple but conveys a lot great write!

[...]

. wow ...
. this stabs ... in a good way ...
. makes one wonder ...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is a question I find myself pondering often. Excellent piece Audrey. So good to read you again.

[FJ Davis]

Despite the negative outcome, could be taken as an expression of extreme closeness. On the other hand, it might just be a unique and lyrical way of saying the moment is gone and I don't know which one of us lost it--being that we're both preoccupied, unsure or screwed-up.
Whatever the case, Audrey, a precious little nugget to add to your growing collection of rarities.