cartoons and fragments

cartoons and fragments

A Poem by Dith

The day waits for me
The 4th day in July sips tea

Be who you are, be yourself
Porno victims and madlib smut

Humility party and you’re not invited

The green ooze ballets on the sky
The yellow heat in cigarette air

Store sales and shop cart surfing

Night casts shadow on the illusion
of day [in our window to space

like a hole on top the world]

Later, insects swarm night sky pavement

Neon city jewelry adorns signs
Like fingers shooting up from earth

80s music and the band is rockin

The party rages on in our hearts
And gives hangovers, ugly mornings

Night ride music, stop light make out
Passion flexing its body on our tongues

Keep it silent and important like moonlight

There is a hole in the world
Tonight—I don’t like it.
 

© 2009 Dith


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This rocked my socks. The way you delivered it was perfect. One of my favorite lines "Night casts shadows on the illusion of day". Well put my friend. This was a visually stunning affair for me, reading it I could see it, smell, feel it. Awesome work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


"
Night ride music, stop light make out
Passion flexing its body on our tongues

Keep it silent and important like moonlight"

very nice.

i dig your style. I look forward to more

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Dith
Dith

Orlando, FL



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I'm 25. I've been writing (essays, poems) for fourteen years. I like poetry, politics, music, philosophy, photography, deep breathing. Lately I've been writing abstract type poetry where I experime.. more..

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