Tuning Haiku

Tuning Haiku

A Poem by John D Phillips

Out of the swirling
Vortex of darkening tones
The single note, A.

© 2009 John D Phillips


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So beautiful! As a violinist who often performs in orchestra, I could just hear the notes all jumbled together. Then, gradually, a clear A from all instruments come together as one. Very beautiful. I think maybe a picture and/or some color to the poem would give this already fabulous poem more flavor. Great write!

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Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautiful! As a violinist who often performs in orchestra, I could just hear the notes all jumbled together. Then, gradually, a clear A from all instruments come together as one. Very beautiful. I think maybe a picture and/or some color to the poem would give this already fabulous poem more flavor. Great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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John D Phillips
John D Phillips

Columbus, GA



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