Polite Society

Polite Society

A Poem by gabrielle
"

The piece speaks for itself.

"

Cold, indifferent

heartless, apathetic

are conjectures hurled

behind my back.

 

but when 

they are in deep, deep s**t

they are more than willing

to kiss my feet.

(probably, a loan shark :)

© 2015 gabrielle


Author's Note

gabrielle
written more than a year ago. obviously a rant. and i could no longer recall the reason behind it.

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Pax
haha, the little comment on the last part makes me smile wide... it made me think about those time na despite the name calling on your or the degrading feedback against you, they still come to you when they needed money or help, this happens mostly in family relatives... I think your denying the little truth there Gab on your author's note, I think you know the reason, perhaps some parts of it anyways... hehe, family matters ito, if i am not mistaken... again a great rant that speaks one of the negatives sides in our society....

Posted 9 Years Ago


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gabrielle

9 Years Ago

Or baka nakukulitan lang sa atin kaya namangka sa kabilang ilog. Peace, Pax :) Bring a pot!? Bad inf.. read more
NeiL ArandA

9 Years Ago

Pot or paso for transplant .Good influence ang tropa at barkada natin .
Pax

9 Years Ago

:) happy to read this ......... :D



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Pax
haha, the little comment on the last part makes me smile wide... it made me think about those time na despite the name calling on your or the degrading feedback against you, they still come to you when they needed money or help, this happens mostly in family relatives... I think your denying the little truth there Gab on your author's note, I think you know the reason, perhaps some parts of it anyways... hehe, family matters ito, if i am not mistaken... again a great rant that speaks one of the negatives sides in our society....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gabrielle

9 Years Ago

Or baka nakukulitan lang sa atin kaya namangka sa kabilang ilog. Peace, Pax :) Bring a pot!? Bad inf.. read more
NeiL ArandA

9 Years Ago

Pot or paso for transplant .Good influence ang tropa at barkada natin .
Pax

9 Years Ago

:) happy to read this ......... :D
Is it a metaphor about demons that were expelled from down under

Posted 9 Years Ago


gabrielle

9 Years Ago

This is about daily realities that we are confronted with, Squink :) :) Thank you for dropping by :)

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I write as a form of diversion and so far, i find it therapeutic. I still struggle with words and proper diction, among others, but I do hope to improve such things in time. Thank you. more..

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