Phobia

written 8-13-08

in your eyes, i see nothing but lies;
the ability to use and become something new.
do you get sick of the cycle,
could you ever settle down?
be something more alive, not so dead inside.
but your options are closed, fear omnipresent.
it's all no use, you stand alone.

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

Wow, that's a powerful expression.. you convyed so much in few words, the mood was intense.

Well written!

[Samith Pich]

interesting ending, though i'm not sure in its present form if it works - but what you're trying to convey is actually really quite powerful

thanks for sharing.