Who Will Remember

We must live for present , who knows what might .....

who will remember these prints on the beach 

The waves will eat them away 

Who will remember this red sun and sea 

The memories  we make ......

Who will remember except of you and me 

Every step we take ahead is our past 

Every breath we breathe could be our last 

But we are lost in this moment 

We live life for now 

No, we are not mistaken 

It's what living is  about 

Who will remember your perfect flaws

These photographs will eventually get lost 

Who will be there to capture you happy 

Who will be there except of me .....

Who will remember except of you and me

Every step we take ahead is our past 

Every breath we breathe could be our last 

But we are lost in this moment 

We live life for now 

No, we are not mistaken 

It's what living is  about 

Our tomorrow is already gone 

We remember our ghosts from yesterday 

But it's just you me for today 

But it's just you me for today ........

Who will be there to paint the walls 

Again with memories 

Who will be there tight his arms around you 

when you feel week 

Who will be there except of me .....

Every step we take ahead is our past 

Every breath we breathe could be our last 

But we are lost i this moment 

We live life for now 

No, we are not mistaken 

It's what living is about 

Reviews

[C_theSurrealist]

I feel the essence of this wonderful poem. It really catches heart of everybody who will read this. Keep writing! :)

[Mr HAnG MaN]

Thank you so much !!!!!!

[Ellie Qtz]

This was amazing. I really felt it! Just at some points there were too many syllables to actually hear the rhyme. This one bit ;Every step we take ahead is our past
Every breath we breathe could be our last, really got to me!

[Namyh]

Mr. HanG Man - This one smacks you right between the eyes. Life!!! Enjoy it while you got it. Nobody gets out alive and it will be gone soon enough, remembered or not remembered. Liked this work HM. Namyh

[Mr HAnG MaN]

Thank you so much Namyh , hope you like my other stuff too