sky blush

Just a romantic poem .

Those tow birds sitting on the wire 

close to each other and for forever 

Those two hands walking ahead 

are never to escape and walk away 

They reflect us 

Those fishes inside the pond 

they chase each other 

until they get lost 

Those branches reaching out so close 

Separated by their roots 

but never lose hope 

They reflect us 

when the ocean pulls the river towards it

stuck in the process of lose and meet 

  

when the sky blushes into pink and red 

it reminds me of you , when we met 

They reflect us 

Those tow birds sitting on the wire 

close to each other and for forever 

Those two hands walking ahead 

are never to escape and walk away 

They reflect us

Those fishes inside the pond 

they chase each other 

until they get lost 

They reflect us 

 

Those branches reaching out so close 

Separated by their roots 

but never lose hope 

They reflect us

Reviews

[OneAmongstMany]

"When the sky blushes into pink and red" - Incredible imagery, perfectly captures the beauty of nature.

Personally, for the purpose of publishing it on here I wouldn't have repeated it, even though in song format it would be fine. This is great though, keep it up!

[Mr HAnG MaN]

Thank you so much one amongst many , will refer to my other songs , hope you find them as beautiful as this one .

[Gee]

Love eh, can't beat it. I'm lucky that I found my life partner 26 years ago, some never find theirs.
First line tow instead of two.
Enjoyed this

[cassia]

why was it repeated? is there a purpose for doing so? sorry im still new around writting

[Mr HAnG MaN]

Well , I basically tried to write a song rather than a poem . I am a newbie too 🤗🤗

[cassia]

woah, now thats cool. maybe type in more lines into it. but other than that i find it pretty deep. ;-;