Simple thoughts, simple expectations

Every girl would like to say these things to the person she loves the most... So, its a simple thought which I felt like jotting down and let others know about it..

People say... "First cut is the deepest one"
Perhaps you have the deepest first cut, May be too many different sort of cuts..
Some of them are visible and a few of them are not. But for me its not necessary to give you a cut so that you'll remember me.
In fact I want to heal all those cuts and fill the cracks in between with my love, My Love....

I also know I'm crazy, abnormal, unreasonable, irritating......
But I'll always make sure, you won't remember your past cuts, as I want to be that soothing honeycomb to join the pieces together.

I cannot fulfill all your expectations,
But I'll give my bits of attention
To uphold you, guide you, be with you till the end of the world...

Might not be in my nature, to give you all luxurious and best things in life, but I'll make sure you are always satisfied with the selfless care and unbreakable chain of affection till eternity..

Whatever you are.. I do not want you to change, as your not my property or asset but you are my heart, and I can't role my heart.. As it rules over me..

And I salute to the womb, which kept you for nine months, and brought you to this world for me.. And I love her who fed you the best and taught you the most precious thing.. Which is to LOVE...

I feel I was made out of your RIB.
As Eve was made out of Adam's rib...
"Christ is the head and the church is the body"..
Likewise You are the head and I'm the body....

The best lovers in the world were my MOM and DAD... And the best love was their love.. Nothing could separate them....not even death
I wanna reflect the same LOVE to the world again... With you.....


You are Special to me....

Author's Note

Hope you like it, well I'm not a writer or a poet to be true..but kinda like sometimes to write.. Do write your comments if there is any place for improvement.. I would really appreciate it.. Thank you

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I liked the design of this...gives an unorthodox feel in the creativity of the verse...you take this and give a story line about commitment and values in the perspective of things...as a reader this just gets at the heart of it all...with the word usage...the entire read flows and goes with your mood when you wrote this one...Good to read you...hope you post more here at the Cafe...

[Day Dreamer]

Thankyou so much Glen Yumang Manese, for your encouraging words, and you are the the first one to comment so I really appreciate your precious time...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Goodness...you're the first to write out my complete name...I saw you on the active online writers...I see you have a knack for writing...even though you say you're not a writer...seems like a good first verse to post...I'm sure you will get more reviews...the write has a feel than the norm that I read here...

[Day Dreamer]

Indeed your name is quite long.. :-) well Thank you so much dear..

[Sami Khalil]

Simple confessions, straightforward impressions, lovely expressions. It seems you have the plan, the dream, the hope. Kudos...

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An unorthodox styled write, but that does not matter much when your words take precedence.

You have written very consummately of the feelings of love. The love you have. The love you want to share. The love you bore witness to. Any piece of writing with this heart and soul needs to be commended.

So, nicely written work. Full of love and warm expression,

[sivan]

i like the innocence in this piece, the innocence of truly loving someone unconditionally without judgement or expectation

[Day Dreamer]

Thank you very much Sivan....