Burning day

Folks with time

to burn

tree limbs and

brush to burn

 

A gray

horse blanket

kind of day

 

To all appearances

cold,

yet life still burns,

a memory

a song

 

her green eyes

with their soft light

Reviews

[StrawberryDream]

I love when poems amplify something so simple like this... You're so very talented. :)

[O'Maoilriann]

I know comparison is something no writer wants to hear, but the line "grey horse blanket kind of day" reminds me so much of Yeat's poem, "The Fisherman." You're style is in no way similar to his, but this line, this admiration of something simple and beautiful for being so, reminded me of the tone of Yeat's poem. I really liked this piece. I like the imagery of a dreary day that still beams with so much light. Well done!

[DanaRegen]

beatiful, it was a nice and relaxing poem. I really liked this, keep up the good work :)

[fallendemonofmercy]

i like that this seems relaxed and almost like its memorabilia all in one
a fond memory though
i liked this

Something about the lines: "a gray horse blanket kind of day" really just got my attention.

[Bella22]

Beautiful. Nicely done!