the truth in romance

the truth in romance

A Poem by ducky(:

    • i watched him burn,
    • fall into the fires of hell.
    • the devil can be anyone...or anything
    • like a beautiful woman, 
    • or a hansom man,
    • he can make you fall in love 
    • and then murder from inside out

    • he can become a beautiful snake,
    • and make you keep him as a pet,
    • then while you sleep,
    • he will poison you,
    • with his venomous surprises,

    • he will use you,
    • he will hurt you,
    • yet you always fall for him.

© 2011 ducky(:


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wow, this is great. nice imagery

he can become a beautiful snake,
and make you keep him as a pet,
then while you sleep,
he will poison you,
with his venomous surprises

my favorite part
such strong emotions as well you did a good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


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