Mysterious Dream

The doors were closed.
The lights were shut off.
The room was dusty and unkempt.
I couldn't see the nearby walls.
The floor were cracked
as I stepped into the room.
I felt the weakness of the floor and I thought I could fall'
if I moved too quickly.

A hand moved toward me and I was scared.
I felt the touch of the hand as soon as I entered the room.
I heard a voice saying Ssh, don't worry and I will help you.
What-ever you need. I can help.

I felt safer.
I could feel the sun kissing my face.
I wanted to know who the person could be?
But I knew it couldn't be possible.
I realized it was just a dream.

Author's Note

E.C - Coyote
Thanks mate :)

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very nice & beautiful like a small piece of story. I really enjoyed your poem...

[Sandra Nair]

Just a simple and humble poem. Moreover a good ending and a talented poet.

[Mayank]

Dreams are what we thought before sleeping or whatever we saw before we slept... dreams are also filled with answer our conscious mind can not answer...

[Warren Daniel II]

A very intellectual deep poem I enjoyed it, this was very descriptive. I also enjoyed the setting of the poem how you drew the picture into our heads the imagery was on point.

Warren

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[shahzad roopani]

End was superb ... perfectly pictured ... good carry on

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[weatherbee]

Nice! Liked the ending allot. Keeping sharing.

:-)

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[KJ]

I really like this because in a way it's chilling and scary but at the same time calming.

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very good. If you need help. Send a e-mail. Have fun and be safe.
Coyote

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)
You helped me a lot :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Samhitha Mopati]

Captivating poem! Kept me guessing till the last line...





















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[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[Sean Sog Miller]

Good Stuff, I felt like I was there!

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)