When I am with you

Your eyes it makes me High
Your smile it make me Fly
Your voice it makes me Smile
Your lips it makes me shy

Author's Note

Complete it ;)

Reviews

[Saddam]

Really nice one.
Beautifully write down.

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[Emily]

I love this one!
Keep it up!!

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"Your eyes they make me go higher and higher.
Your smile make me fly to the clouds above.
Your voice make me tremble and smile with joy.
You lips make me afraid and shy.
When I'm with you. You make me feel alive and strong."
Did I complete the poem? We could be a good team for writing. I liked the hope and the energy of your words.
Coyote

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

This is really amazing!
Loved it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[BlueDreams]

Short and sweet and subtly written :)
Few words that explained everything ;)

[Mayank]

There's Ronan keating 'you say it better when you say nothing at all' your poem has that feel...

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

should I take this as compliment? ;)

[Mayank]

yeah! why not?

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

was kidding :P
Thank you :)