A walk

Whenever you walk alone
You find your way long
Wondering to stay back
rather to walk on

You find your way short
When you walk with special one
wondering to walk long

rather to stop soon.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

I agree, I would much rather walk with someone, but it is nice to take
a stroll alone with your thoughts, great piece, thought provoking!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mayank]

There are things which you observe when you are walking alone, when it's a long road the company will keep you busy but that would make journey easy... nice work

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Long walks are better with two content people. I enjoyed the poem. Nice twist of words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Saddam]

You find your way short
When you walk with special one
wondering to walk long
rather to stop soon.

Sweat and realistic write. Life is nothing without someone's special company.
Beautiful thought dear friend.

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[Emily]

Short and sweet!
Love it!
Well done!

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you Dear :)

[Daisy]

wow so true and amazing poem
Great work

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[Horizons]

"A walk?" Very impressive!!

The first two lines`re strong enough to make the whole poetry looking like an artistry... created by your beautiful writhing heart. Yes, of course, a "Walk" (with someone special) is kinda lovable thing even in the world that takes the spirit to ecstasy. And, this ecstasy`s never meant to be faded away, for no particular reason. Well, beautiful.. your menu-script`s kinda hot, yeah, of course, (as hot as) like ya. Appreciate it! It makes a very vivid imagery of 'peace' belonged to love in my mind. Sounds interesting!

You must write on it something big.. like an epic-write. Do let me know if you do write anything on it or tryna make a 'sequel' of "A Walk". I`d like to read if you do paint even the love on words!

Good-Luck!

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

well i will try to make it better one!
anyways thank you :)

[Horizons]

And, i`m sure, you`d give your not even just best, but "Better". Pop-me up as you cook somethin` creative!!
Pleasure to make ya feel good!

[BlueDreams]

Time always slips away rapidly when there is phase of happiness :)
Beautiful write :) Loved it!

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[BlueDreams]

Welcome :)

[shahzad roopani]

its about hesitation and path and finding some one ..... a mystery

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

didn't get you.