Togetherness

Togetherness

A Poem by Dimple Nahata Jain

When you will say Yes
I will say No
Opposite answers is what we will give
When I will Love
You will Hate
Opposite feelings is what we will have
When u will Remember 
I will Forget
Opposite things is what we will do
But when you will Stop
I will Stay 
Because being together is what we will always want.

© 2015 Dimple Nahata Jain


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Your logic is true. Us human swim between yes and no. Rarely knowing what we need.
"But when you will Stop
I will Stay
Because being together is what we will always want."
If we are lucky. We find someone willing to hold on and enjoy the ride of life and love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

9 Years Ago

thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
But when you will Stop
I will Stay
Because being together is what we will always want.

Got it..... Really it is.
Great read dear poet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

9 Years Ago

thank you :)
I like it!!
Well done!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Okay. I got this.

It makes me chuckle. Your words really make me feeling kinda hilarious... to some extent. Because, here`s all what I get what you make your readers get.. through this poetry:

But when you will Stop
I will Stay
Because being together is what we will always want.

Impressive again! Very clever. You well understand the value and the price of poetry. And, It`s well shown up... from your work... through what you do. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

9 Years Ago

thank you again:)
Bravo! I love the closure in this write and the opposites in the entire post. Sort of like opposites attract. Nice style! ~Sharon

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dimple Nahata Jain

9 Years Ago

thank you :)
Interesting chain of events, opposites attract I take it! The last line does
put things into perspective, nice work, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dimple Nahata Jain

9 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Dimple Nahata Jain
Dimple Nahata Jain

kolkata, westbengal, India



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