Its meant to be something

This is my first poem.

Happiness, it lies in you
Sadness, its without you
Trusting you is What I did
Breaking is what you did
Remembering you is what I have done
Forgetting me is what you have done

Revenge is what you have taken
Forgiving you is what I have given

Ignoring me is what you did
when your attention is all I wanted.

Author's Note

I m glad that you read it.
Do correct my mistakes.
Do let me know how I am writing.

Reviews

[Horizons]

"Sadness, its without you"

Write it in this way: "Sadness, it`s without you."

Hope you got it!
The rest of the piece`s very well... creative, insightful, & painful as well. After reading your few stuffs, I can easily say that the reason of your poetry`s "love" whether "broken" or "static", it ain`t matter. What does matter is, you write very cool stuffs blown off by your heart to ... winds - The winds of love. Very nice imagery you plot across your pages and well decorate your pieces in such simple words. Nice job, sweety! I had a very great time with your work!

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

Thank you :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You have been really up to the mark with the lines. Yes it really feels bad if the person you love the most tries to ignore you & get away from your life. Nice wrote!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is fine. Nice flow of thoughts and lesson given. I liked the honest tone and flow and directness of of your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CA Anurag Sharma]

short and sweet.... nice read....

[Saddam]

Wonderful things in just few words...
It is amazing.
Beautiful write dear friend.

[Emily]

'Remembering you is what I have done'
I love this line!
Well done!

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

Thank you so much :)

[savannah estrada]

i thought it was vary true for so many people.I really liked how you showed both sides of it most only do one side but showing both really showed hoe much pain their is on both sides.

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

thank you :)

[shahzad roopani]

to explain by way of contrast is God's way...Amazing

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

i don't know what should i say all i can say is thank you :)

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A powerful piece packed in few lines describing one-sided love. A great fist write! - FT

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

Thank you :)

[Rachel Stiber]

A heartfelt poem of contrasts. The contrasting is my favorite part. Keep up the good work!

[Dimple Nahata Jain]

Thank you...
keep checking my other posts too ;)