Autum Haiku

Cold air
Her warm breath
I hurry not

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Next to a tree, under a moonless night the chilly air bothers me not as she warms my lips

Author's Note

Haiku is a genre of Japanese poetry consisting on 5,7,5 syllable poems, this translates to short line, long line, short line in English, I hope you enjoy it.

Reviews

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. beautiful poetry ...

Actually, what it translates to in English is 5-7-5 syllables. The Japanese form is written in 17 'moras' (or 'on'). So when written in English it should be 5-7-5.