Winter Haiku

The sun sits still

On top of the leaves

My feet are cold

Author's Note

Haiku is a genre of Japanese poetry consisting on 5,7,5 syllable poems, this translates to short line, long line, short line in english, I hope you enjoy it.
(to find out more about Haiku check http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku)

Reviews

[Karmee]

This is a very well written write.

[Luna Northstar]

Wow, so I'm not the only person who loves to go out in the now with bare feet :) I love this one. Its was sweet and meaningful. I love reading your writing :)

[Anna Kay]

This is sooo good! i love how it made me feel like i was in snow without any shoes on! its very well written and its very good
Keep on!
-Anna Kay Patton

[J. C. Koch]

!!!!! I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY PERSON WHO RUNS AROUND OUTSIDE WITHOUT SHOES IN WINTER!!!!
jkjk, but I really do like it, its very blunt.