whereas

whereas

A Poem by DiMar4u

....once we were merry,
drunk with one another's voice,
though it seems vapid,
you disappear by choice.

even as you're standing,
in body-before my eyes,
the emptiness swallows you
and the moment lies.

i watch you,
your evaporated soul
drawn deep into anything
but the now,
looking to anything
but what surrounds you.

i know you....
because, sometimes,
....i am you-

-so desperate to be
anywhere but here.



© 2014 DiMar4u


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DiMar4u
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I love this piece. It is one I could really relate to. I love the flow and the rhyming is great. Very enjoyable for me. Thamnk you for sharing.

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DiMar4u
DiMar4u

Lodi, NJ



About
-you might describe me as a magnanimous perpetual transmuter, or you may simply point and say "..that guy over there-" more..

Writing
i am. i am.

A Poem by DiMar4u