In the Mountains of West VirginiaA Story by Dillon McFarlaneHalley and Rich were having a fun time climbing the large rock. That was until the cannibals showed up.Halley Smith and Richard Stocker, two Newfield State
College students grunted as they made their way up the steep rocky wall which
they were climbing, sweat dripping down their faces. Finally Rich got to the
top and began to whoop as he looked around at the great sight before him. “Okay” You're great! You got
the line?” Halley asked Rich. “Yeah!” He panted back. “Come
on up slowpoke!” Halley began to climb faster,
jealous of her partner's success and quickly panicked as her foot slipped off
of a rock. She began to fall with a loud scream. Suddenly, her harness caught
her and she dangled in mid-air. Rich appeared above her. “You okay? You know we're 50
miles from anybody. Who are you screaming for?” Rich asked. “You!” She snapped back. “Come on,” said Rich and he
walked out of Halley's sight. She began to scramble upwards
to the top and asked for Rich to pull her up when she heard a loud thud and
groan from Rich. “Rich? Just pull me up!”
Halley shouted up. “All right don't be a dick, Richie. I need a pull!” Out of nowhere, Rich came
stumbling into Halley's sight. He was on the ground and he was crawling to the
edge. “Rich?” Halley asked, her question full of horror and confusion.
Suddenly, Halley felt a liquid drop onto her face. She knew it was blood when
it seeped into her mouth. She wiped it off with disgust. She looked up and saw
Rich being pulled away swiftly out of sight again. Then suddenly he was thrown
off the cliff as Halley watched but looked away as he thudded onto the ground.
She began to cry but couldn't as she felt herself being yanked upwards. “Aaargh!” she screamed. She
tried to keep herself from being pulled up by digging her hands into the wall
but the rope kept being pulled. She began to loosen her bracket but she was
pulled again. In desperation, she pulled out her knife and began to cut the
rope. It was easily cut and she steadied herself onto the wall. She saw the end
of the rope being pulled up. She looked to her left and saw Rich's rope. She
raced carefully to it, grunting with effort. Then she slipped. She felt herself
fall to the ground and she thudded. Hard. Right beside her dead boyfriend. His
head had been hammered in and there was blood covering his face, putting her
hands to her mouth in disgust. Suddenly, she heard branches snap and she looked
up to see the trees moving and she heard uncontrollable laughter above. She
suddenly brought herself to her knees and jumped up, racing away from dead
Rich. She punched her way through trees and finally got to a clearing. Their
black Ford Mondeo lay waiting for her a few meters ahead and she stumbled to
it. Without warning, a long piece of barbed wire tripped her foot, making her fall
face down into the gravel. On her stomach, she looked at her car one more time
before she was dragged into the forest with her throat cut. © 2014 Dillon McFarlaneAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorDillon McFarlaneDoune, Perthshire, United KingdomAboutI am a 15 year old boy who loves writing stories, especially horror stories but I am going to try and experiment with different genres. I have published 3 novels and would really like some advice from.. more..Writing
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