![]() Chapter FourA Chapter by Dillon McFarlanehey
stuck together and went to the kitchen to collect the keys for the car. They
kept on their hands and knees because they guessed that the killer could have a
gun. Steven leapt up and raked around in the spare money jar for the pair of
keys. Once he had retrieved them, Steven pointed out the door which led to the
double car garage. They piled into the garage where a light was on and Steven
unlocked the car. “Who
can drive?” Steven asked and Katherine grabbed the keys. “Harry
and Dave were the only ones who could drive,” Hannah was still weeping. “Ok,
everyone get in!” Katherine unlocked the car and everyone got in. “Oh
no! My phone!” Hannah cried and jumped out of the car to run back inside the
house. “Hannah,
no!” Katherine shouted but nobody could stop her. “I’ll
get her!” Steven shouted and Katherine held him back. “No!”
Katherine shouted. “I’ll go!” Katherine
ran through, following Hannah. Hannah was in the living room and she was on the
ground, backing up. Katherine stayed silent as Hannah screamed. She screamed
because the murderer was standing in front of her. The killer took a swipe and
ripped a lamp out of the wall and moved it between two hands. He lifted it high
and Katherine watched as he brought it down rapidly on Hannah’s face. Blood
gushed from a wound which opened in her gouged eye. Hannah screamed and the
killer brought the lamp down again and again until Hannah ceased to move. Blood
was splattered all around Hannah and she began to gurgle before taking her last
breath. The killer dropped the remains of the smashed up lamp and quickly
turned his head to Katherine who screamed and ran back to where she came from.
The survivors, Steven and Flora were waiting outside in the garage when Katherine
came running out. “We
have to get out of here...NOW!” She screamed and got into the car, starting the
engine. Flora
was screaming. “Hannah?” “Dead,
Flora!” Katherine screamed. Flora
began to weep. They
backed up once the engine was on and crashed out of the garage door. Suddenly,
there was a huge crash and they realised that the tyres had popped. Katherine
screamed and the car spun and stopped with a screech. “What
happened?” Steven asked gasping. “I-I-I
don’t know,” Katherine screamed. “He’ll
be out here soon so we have to get back to the house!” Steven said and opened
his door. “Come
on, guys!” Steven waved to the group. They
came tumbling out of the car and ran with Steven back to the house. Once
inside, they were suddenly plunged into darkness. “He’s
turned out the power!” Steven shouted. Katherine and Flora were panting and Flora
sat down on the ground. “Come
on, guys! Go down into the basement! Shush!” Steven pulled his “friends” into
the basement. When downstairs, he noticed the fuse box. He opened it and it was
sparking. He pressed the main power switch cautiously and a surge of
electricity shocked him. Flora
screamed when she saw him being hurt. “Flora,
I’m ok!” Steven yelled and shook his hand in the air violently, cringing. “Steven,
are you ok?” Katherine asked. “Yeah
I’m fine!” Steven was getting cross. Suddenly, there was a bright light in Flora
and Katherine’s faces and Steven was holding torches. He gave one to Katherine
and one to Flora and he kept one for himself. “Come
on! We have to get out of here!” Steven waved with his other hand for both of
the girls to come with him up the stairs which creaked loudly with every step.
Steven opened the door slowly and gazed out of the elfin crack that appeared in
the door and gasped. He saw the killer’s back. The killer was looking out of
the window, wondering if the survivors were still out there. He was really
wrong. “He’s
right there, guys! After three we go out and grab him! One two three!” Steven
pounced out of the door to grab the killer but he was gone. Suddenly there was
a scream behind him and he turned to see Flora flailing her arms as the killer
raised a sharp knife to her throat. She was screaming until Steven ran to the
killer and pounced on him, clawing at him and attacking him. Flora got released
and ran away, leaving Katherine and Steven alone with the killer. When the
killer was unable to move, he and Katherine took off ran through all the rooms
of the huge house, searching for the lost Flora. © 2014 Dillon McFarlane |
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Added on August 8, 2014 Last Updated on August 8, 2014 Author![]() Dillon McFarlaneDoune, Perthshire, United KingdomAboutI am a 15 year old boy who loves writing stories, especially horror stories but I am going to try and experiment with different genres. I have published 3 novels and would really like some advice from.. more..Writing
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