Maybe In Another Life

Maybe In Another Life

A Poem by dillonjensen
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For anyone who has had "the one" slip away from their grasp.

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Maybe in another life I'd be yours, and you'd be mine.
We'd stay in on weekends, and gaze into the vacant night.
Sifting through the memories as the sun began to shine.
Staring into your beautiful eyes, I cried,"'Tis a sight."

Watching you enter a room was like seeing an angel.
Your smile could light up even the darkest of places.
When we met eyes for the first time I felt my heart tangle.
We danced that night away and I felt all of God's graces.

The way that you would look at me was just so infectious.
I could never get enough of you, even together.
Being with you was all that I cherished, you were precious.
Can't help but smile because we were made for each other.

So, maybe in another life I'd be the one for you.
As time passes, I realize we are going different ways.
I will keep writing these verses just to get me on through.
Fading memories that all began with your starry gaze.


© 2012 dillonjensen


Author's Note

dillonjensen
Trying to get back into the swing of things. Sorry if it's kind of sloppy or isn't coherent at parts. Thanks for reading.

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Oh my gosh, this is so beautiful. I can actually relate to this piece of art. My eyes started to tear up since I thought about a particular person while reading this. I don't think this could be any more perfect than this! :)
Please keep writing.

P.S.-This is going in my library. :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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We never forget the one that got away... The memory of love is imprinted in our minds forever... You have described a beautiful and gentle love that over time seems to have faded. Maybe one day it will be rekindled. Well penned!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my gosh, this is so beautiful. I can actually relate to this piece of art. My eyes started to tear up since I thought about a particular person while reading this. I don't think this could be any more perfect than this! :)
Please keep writing.

P.S.-This is going in my library. :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and heartachingly so

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think its lovely! Tenderly versed and an insightful piece...lamentful and delivered with compassion! xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THIS IS REALLY SWEET..I LIKE IT :-]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fantastic writing. This ain't sloppy, it is real good!
Good flow of thoughts that is beautifully coherent:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 5, 2012
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