Am I In Love, Or Just Hungover?

A poem about a girl from a guy.

She knows I'm dead inside,
But I make her feel alive.
What a rare thing to be said.
I almost picture fireworks as our lips dance upon one another.
She breathes life into my empty void,
As I realize her crazy matches my crazy.

Author's Note

Any tips or suggestions are welcome. Hope you like it.

Reviews

[Tamika]

I love it! Wonderfully written

[Jvonne]

"She breathes life into my empty void," I loved this line. Great write.

[dillonjensen]

Why thank you for the kind words.

[iamshadowine]

When soul mates find each other, when true love is found. Is there a better feeling than that?
I love this poem :D
keep writing :D

[dillonjensen]

Thank you!

[Michael X]

Finshes to classic lust and despair! and expresses the poetic nature of heaertbreak, clearly.

[dillonjensen]

Thank you, sir! Appreciate the kind words.