Internal Bleeding

About a girl, from a guy.

She's the only reason
My heart keeps on beating.
The pain is too much to keep on bleeding.
As we spiral into the abyss,
I think back to moments of our bliss.
I need you,
Take my hand.

Fragmented pictures of what once was,
Blinds me now more than anything does.
The addict inside me craves her warm touch.
My heart misses her much.
She's the only reason.
I need you,
Take my hand.

Author's Note

Any critiques are appreciated. I completely reversed the structure in the second stanza following the same pattern.

Reviews

[D.]

Should amend the 3rd last line and the was great

[dillonjensen]

Thanks for reading. Could you elaborate on what you mean?