The look you make when you're thinking really hard makes me smile

The look you make when you're thinking really hard makes me smile

A Poem by dillonjensen
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Just another short poem. I like short poems that force the mind to wander aimlessly. Now I've invaded your head, smile.

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She has no idea what I've in store.
A plan so clever, she will adore.
Smiling and laughter, baby.
And that's what I will do it for.

© 2014 dillonjensen


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I liked this a lot. You capture and draw out multiple emotions from the reader which is very impressive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

10 Years Ago

Your words humble me. Thank you for reviewing!
It's the element of surprise that make the moment special...

Lovely thoughts in short verse, Dillon... Nicely done!~xoxo~:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

10 Years Ago

Why thank you! Your words mean a lot to me. :)
short and simple, good rhyme and meaning. thanks for share

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dillonjensen

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing! Appreciate it!

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