Something Good

Finally, a more happy poem.

She whispers something soft into my ear.

This moment then became clear.

'Twas not a dream at all....

The warmth of her glowing body being felt next to me.

I glance over and see the passion igniting in her eyes.

She leans over to kiss me, but pulls back right before we meet lips.

Almost as if to tease me into playing her game.

I smile at her and then begin the chase.

This was the calm before the storm that was coming.

As our lips crash like waves of euphoria,

She grabs my hand and squeezes firmly.

I pull her in so close that I can feel her heart beating faster and faster.

Tangled in a web of complete jubilation,

She bites my upper lip and begins to grin.

As I kiss her forehead, I say, "I love you."

Lying next to each other with eyes locked in.

I can't help but appreciate a comfortable silence.

My eyes begin to slowly close, but she begins to say something.

She tells me that she loves me, and how she is so lucky.

I go in for another kiss, and tell her that I am the lucky one.

I tell her that she is my something good in this world,

And that I will not play with that.

Author's Note

I hope you all enjoy this. Took me about half an hour to write it.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Your tenderness is expressed wonderfully here, Dillon!

I love that your words exude adoration through each kiss... (on the forehead) the most delicate place to show love...

So ROMANTIC!... I enjoyed reading this side of you, Sweetie...
Nicely done!~xoxo~:)

[dillonjensen]

Thank you so much! I am very glad you liked it. I hope to start writing more.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I hope you write more too... It's great to read you again, Dillon! xx :)

[dillonjensen]

I am humbled yet again! Thank you, Robbie. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

(((hugs)))~xoxo~:)

[R. L. Hill]

It is lovely. It may benefit from being centered for easier reading. As it is laid out now, I am having trouble catching the cadence of the lines. I love the message though ^^

[dillonjensen]

Thank you for the kind words! I will adjust it.

[R. L. Hill]

Oh yea...That is tons better. I read it again a second time and it flowed a lot more easily for my eyes. Great write!

[dillonjensen]

Why thank you! I really appreciate that!

[Blue]

Is the "she" in your poem someone you personally know? And this poem is a memory captured into words? If yes, then she is lucky! I particularly like the last two lines. They sum up the message that every girl wants to hear.

[dillonjensen]

This was conjured up from an idea or a memory of an ex-girlfriend that kept playing in my head like it was on repeat the whole time. The poem itself is a manifestation of that idea, but it didn't happen in real life. I am happy to hear that you liked it!