White

Borrowed the template from the song "Yellow" by Coldplay. One of my favorite songs.

Look at the moon,
look how it shines for you,
and everything you do.
Yeah, it was all white.

I came to roam,
and wrote a poem for you,
for all that you do,
and it was called, "White."

So I took my chance,
and now I am to blame,
for its put out flame,
but it was still white.

Your glow,
oh, yes your glow and smile.
Something
I have not seen in a while.
You know I miss you so.

Author's Note

For Amanda, I hope you enjoyed this. It was fun writing.

Reviews

[Miranda Richard]

The last line was stunning! Great poem ;)

[dillonjensen]

Thank you! I appreciate it.

[lei]

oh so sweet .. i love the flow :)

[dillonjensen]

Thank you for your kind words. :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Sweet poem for Amanda. :) And I know any girl would love to receive a poem such as this. It seems to be written out of sincerity. :)

[dillonjensen]

Thank you for your kind words. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a sweet write!... you turned the tables reflecting "white", it's truly adorable...she'll love it!

Lovely work, Dillon.

[dillonjensen]

Why thank you! Someone asked me to write a poem for them, so I gave it my best try! Appreciate the kind words.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It' very sweet.. I can see your heart here.. :)

[dillonjensen]

I think that's a job well done then. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

yes indeed... :D

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was beautiful and I am sure Amanda will love this too. xo Winter

[dillonjensen]

Thank you for reading!