Her Smile

Inspired by Robbie's smile. Her pictures always remind me of pure happiness in its most basic form, a smile.

A smile so golden and pure,
its radiance hard to ignore.
Her vibrant skin draws me in near.
Whose succulent lips I adore.

Reverberating vivid dreams
of tranquility in her eyes,
igniting passion as she gleams;
her silhouette begins to rise.

Author's Note

I feel some editing is necessary. Feel free to help me out.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What a sweet write Dillon!...this is a dreamy and uplifting piece, indeed! I'm humbled by your gift, it truly warms my heart. I'm such a lucky girl to have captured your inspiration to write this. I look forward to reading more. This flows nicely, and the rhyme is Fantastique!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!~xoxo~:))

[dillonjensen]

You are very welcome, my dear. :) It was an honor to have written about someone like yourself! I'm very pleased you enjoyed it! Means a lot to me!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It means a lot to me too!..Thank you so much Dillon, I'm honored!~xoxo~:)

[dillonjensen]

I'm glad to hear it! Makes me smile. :D

[Dye]

That is so incredibly sweet to do. It is truly nice when you can find the inspiration in the beauty of your surroundings. A smile can not only make your day better but can improve the day of the people around you, how very true.

[dillonjensen]

Thank you for your kind words. There is an aesthetic value to everything, we need but only find it!

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

This one speaks to me, man. Oh the feels ;_; love it, just love it.

[dillonjensen]

I appreciate it, man! Glad you enjoyed it!

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

No probs (/._.)/

[koty bell]

Best poem ive read in a while... Youve been doing really well as of late good stuff dude keep it up

[dillonjensen]

Thanks, man! That's quite the compliment!

[koty bell]

No prob man keep up with the excellent work

[NA]

A beautiful dedication :) x

[dillonjensen]

Gracias. :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beauty and desire leading to passion. Love this.

[dillonjensen]

Cheers! Appreciate the kind words.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)